Thursday, February 19, 2009

Free Write: What If.?.?.?.

What if you can get money anytime you want. If people could get money anytime they want, we wouldn't be in a recession right now. If i could get money anytime i want, i would get anything that i want to get. If people could get money anytime they wanted to, schools will have more books and could remodel the school. If people could money anytime they wanted to, everyone would be rich and it would be no more poor people in the United States Of America. I wish people could get money anytime they wanted to.

If people get money when they want to, i don't think people would be robbing other people. i don't think it will be any violence in the world. We will have all the money in the world if people could get money when they wanted to. People will have enough food that will last for a lifetime. If people could get money will they wanted to, people won't have to stress about paying bills. Everything world be perfect in the world if people could get money when ever they wanted to. There wouldn't be any wars going on. People would have plenty of oil. If people had all the money in the world, I think that it will bring peace in the world. People will be happy. Life would just be like heaven!

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