A person that is special to me is my brother. My brother can be in the way sometimes, but he is always there for me in almost everything i do. My brother encourages me to do anything i want to do. he was the one that encourage me to play football. My brother goes to all my basketball games. We are always doing something together. Me and him do fight a lot but if i need something, he will get it for me.
My brother knows when something is wrong with me. My brother always has my back. Me and my brother always do stuff together on our spare time. Me and my brother are always fighting. But other than that, he is real cool person once you get to know him. My brother gives me pointers from what to do and what not to do. My brother is always looking out for me. My brother is truly my hero.
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