If I had 1 million dollars, first i would by my parents a new house. Then i would go to the mall, and get everything that i can. I would pay for my college education. I would put some of that money in the bank. Then I would buy myself a car. If i had a million dollars, i would build my own school just for me. The rest of the money, i wouldn't know what i will do with it.
Furthermore, I probably would give some money to the people that are in need. I would start my own business. That what i will do if i had a million dollars.
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