Friday, February 20, 2009

Free Write: My Perfect Vacation

My perfect vacation was when i went on the Carnival Cruise trip in 2004. We went to Belize, Costa Maya, Costa Rica , plenty other places. The cruise was a 7 day trip. My whole family went. The whole time a had a wonderful time. The cruise ship had plenty of activities including a basketball tournament. They had a teen night club every night. They had a arcade room. they had a place where you could work out. they had a track. there was a lot of things going on this cruise. I believe that it was the best time of my life.!

When we went on some of the islands, we went to there stores. We brought accessories. We went to the beach. We saw some of their animals that were there. We ate some of there food. We just had a very good time. The cruise overall went very fast. but that was the best time that i had in my life so far.

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