Monday, February 2, 2009

Free Write: Family

I think family is important to everybody. Without your family, I believe that you wouldn't be the person that you are today. Without my family, i wouldn't know what i would do. My family supports me in everything i do. They never let me make wrong decisions.

Without my family i wouldn't be nothing. My family cares about me. They are always keeping you out of trouble. They always make sure that I'm doing good in school. My family encourage me. They want me to do something in life. They want me to be the best person that i can be. My family gets me what ever i want most of the time. They always know when something is wrong with me and if I'm mad about something.

In conclusion, i think that everyone should be glad that they have a family that cares about them. Without my family my life would be nothing. So i think everyone should be thankful that that they have a family. Because some people in this world don't even have family.

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